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Funny and oh-dear. Loved it.
Some unsollicited advice: a 15 min read might evoke some but-firsts with modern readers. I'd say your story has enough to be three stories, at least!

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Francis Laleman
Francis Laleman

Written by Francis Laleman

a husband, father, painter, writer, educationist, designer, facilitator. author of “Resourceful Exformation” (a book on facilitation) available from Amazon.

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